Living alone or living with roommates
When we enter the college ,the first thing we will meet is how to live. Living alone or living with roommates is worthy to be considered.
Some of us students hold the view that we should live alone. Their reasons are as follows. With living alone,they can decided when and how to get work done on their own,which means getting more private space in a way. In addtion, without the noise ,one can have a good rest in a quiet place. Besides,by living alone,we can develop the independence.
On the other hand,the others prefer living with roommates. A roommates may become a friend. One you can share the happiness and the sorrows with.Consequently,you can feel living at home, which make a real difference in easing your homesick. What’s more, sometimes we can figure something out together.
Personally,I would like to live with roommates. Nowadays,we need to learn to fit into this society. Be the change you want to see in the world. Thus, we require to gain the ability of getting on with all kinds of people. It is living with other people that provides us a great chance.
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第一：without the noise 改成without the noise made by roommates.
第二：A roommates may become a friend.One you can share the happiness and the sorrows with.改成A roommate may become a friend ，which you can share the happiness and the sorrows with.
第三：Consequently,you can feel living at home, which make a real difference in easing your homesick. 改成Consequently,you can feel like living at home, which make a real difference in easing your homesick.