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A smile is a universal facial expression. When we smiling ,it express that we are in a good mood,and it also means you are friendly to the others.With a smile on ours face ,self-confidence will be built. Besides,you may have a good impression on the others. As a consequence,you could gradually become charming ,meanwhile,you can get along well with the people around.
A smile is anything but useless. A smile is a beginning of harmonious as well as a passport of communication. Ever time when we are in a complex situation difficult to solve. A smile may do make wonders. It can ease both of us,let us calm down for a while. Furthermore,a smile,which can change enemies into friends. Not only a smile get us feel side by side,but also can make us feel heart to heart.

解答:

1.A smile去掉A 2.we改成you,smiling改成smile 3.express后加es,we改成you 4.the others去掉the 5.ours 改成our 6. impression on the others 去掉the 7.,which can change enemies into friends 去掉which 8.Not only a smile改成A smile not only
有很多人称不一致,we and you,自己再改改。