Living in cities



People lives in cities has been brought into focus.Nowwadys,more and more people moving in cities,acording to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of 24000 to 75300.There are mang reason accounting for living in cities.
Among all these reasons,the city's economy is more rich than country.In other words,in the city has advanced equipements and advanced technology.What's more the living conditions are very well in the city.In addition,the traffic is very convenient in the city.As a result.more and more people living in cities.
As far as I'm concerned,living in cities is well.First of all,live in city,people living standard improre.Besides there are very convenient for people's life in the city.Taking into consideration.I may reasonably conclude that living in cities.


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lives应改为living哦，做定语用。moving IN 应该为MOVE TO.mang reason 改为many reasons.Among all these reasons,the city's economy is more rich than country这个最好说one of these reasons is economy in city develops better than than that incountryside.接下来那句in the city 去掉in the。very well 最好改为better.live in city,people living standard improre.改为people live in city enjoy a improre living standard.there are very convenient 改为it is convient .Taking into consideration.I may reasonably conclude that living in cities.
改为so,i may reasonably conclude that it is better living in cities