Since grade two ,we will have this new course. As we can see, there exist the phenomenon that most of us get good marks in the exams,however,lacing skills of fixing little things is becoming a sign of us generation. Consequently,General Technology is tend to develop our basic skills as well as improve the ability of creation. After we finish this course,we are expected to get the hang of different types of normal tools. Besides, we have to learn to repair ,design as well as create some new things by ourselves. Before we graduate,it is necessary to pass the written tests.
Most students are in favor of the course. For General Technology is of great benefit to us. When facing the fierce competition, we are forced to absorb more living skills. After all, the more we learn, the better we will become.
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Since grade two, we will have a new model, General Technology. It can be seen that most students can get good mars in exams, but the lack of skills of fixing little things becomes a typical issue for our generation. Consequently, General Technology is designed to develop our basic skills and improve our creativity. After finishing the model,we are expected to get the hang of different types of normal tools. In addition, this model will also train us to repair, design and make some new things by ourselves. Before our graduation, it is required for us to pass a written test.
Most students appreciate the course and General Technology is of great benefit to us. Facing the fierce competition, we need to adopt more living skills. After all, the more we learn, the better we will become.