How to be a good learner
Learning methods are very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort. Most of us have the same suggestions as follows. We should make a reasonable plan that is carefully considered,and stick to it to end. When we get home , we are expected to review what we have learned in time . moreover ,tool books and other resources should be taken good advantage of . besides ,as an old saying goes , all work no play make Juck a dull boy . so we should combine work and rest properly.
Personally ,when we come across the problem that is confused ,we can ture to teachers for help . communicating with friends about learning experience is a wise choice.
It is the passion of learning as well as good methods that really count . we will have a success one day.

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How to be a good learner
Learning methods are very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort (好句子，简单一点的还有do more with the less). Most of us have the same suggestions as follows. We should make a reasonable plan that is carefully considered, and stick to it to the end. When we get home, we are expected (supposed) to review what we have learned in time. Moreover, tool books(reference books) and other resources should be taken good advantage of . Besides, as an old saying goes, all work no play make Juck a dull boy. So we should combine work and rest properly.
Personally, when we come across the problem that is confused (confusing), we can ture(turn) to teachers for help . Communicating with friends about learning experience is a wise choice.
It is the passion of learning as well as good methods that really count. We will have a success one day.