I'm going to a party on saturday for Jill's birthday.Her birthday is on thursday but she wanted to have the party on a Weekend.She's having a barbecue.I think june is a good month to have a birthday because of the weather.I love going to barbecues on the summer.My birthday is in Winter and it's too cold to eat outside!


找出六处错误

表示星期几的单词首字母都要大写。 saturday 改成Saturday.
thursday 改成Thursday .wanted改成wants 应该用一般现在时态。
on a Weekend改成at a weekend.june 改成June，月份的首字母也要大写。 on the summer改成 in summer 在某个季节用介词in ,而且不用定冠词。