最近，为了更好地了解中学生的课外阅读习惯，我们在2000名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查的一些情况：

调查内容 初中生 高中生
阅读数量（5本以下每年） 37% 37%
喜欢的阅读材料 漫画杂志、幽默故事 通俗小说、经典作品、科幻小说
学生阅读量少的原因 没兴趣 作业太多，没时间
调查结论 1． 要鼓励学生更多地开展阅读；
2．给予学生更多课外阅读的时间。


[写作内容]
请根据以上的调查数据，写一篇短文，需包括如下内容：
１． 开展调查的时间、调查对象和目的、；
２． 初高中学生每年阅读数量的发现；
３． 初高中学生所喜欢阅读材料方面的差异；
４． 关于初高中学生阅读量少的原因；
５． 调查结论带给我们的启示。

[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。总分15分


We take a survey about 2,000 students for study their reading behavour recently. The survey shows that 37% of middle school students and 37% of high school students read less than five books a year. Most of middle school students are like to read picture magazine and humour story while high school students are like to read popular novel, classical novel and scientific novel. Middle school student read little books because they are not interest and too much homeworks made high school students no time to read. We should encourage students to read books and give more time to them for reading.


请找出其中错误之处并给予修改及评分。多谢

你的作文至多能得11分。把我的和你的对照一下，就能看出差别的了。避免把系动词和动词一起使用。
We have recently made a survey on 2 000 students to know their reading behavour. The survey shows that 37% of middle school students and 37% of high school students have read less than five books a year. Most of the middle school students like to read cartoon magazines and humour story while high school students are fond of reading popular novels, classical works, and scientific novels. Middle school student read few books because they are not interested in reading whereas high school students read less because of too much homeworks. Therefore, we should try to encourage students to read more books.