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I live in XXX where is one of the most beautiful city in China . And the tourism plays an important role in our city.
Recently, with the economy of our country growing, people have more money to travel. More and more people come to our city. At the same time ,it brings a lot of advantages. First of all, to attract the tourist come to our city , our government did many things to make our city beautiful and clean. Second, with the tourist coming, it also make the citizen's income higher then past time. Lastly, the tourist can learn about our city, it cause more people come to our city.
In view of these advantages, the tourism is very important for us.

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完成分18分,扣2处拼写错误2分,得分16分